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1Trying editing flow Empty Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 2:04 am

Kyuubbankai

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I try something new
i hope you can tell me
what you think About it!!!!

2Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 2:16 am

Staiks

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Honestly I'm the typical action trash so I'm not the best person to judge this, but everything feels clean and nice, I'd only improve the outzooms by this point, gj boiiiii okXD

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3Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 3:21 pm

Strat

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I liked how you changed cc in 0:04 to a scene night, I guess badr can help you more (squardz) with this kind of songs, but I will try to help.
Since 0:06, fast part is showing it in the song, so instead change the next scene with a beat (final compass) I would have starting changing to one scene, then keep coming with archer one. The point for flow is to combine the song vibe with the eye experience, so more than 1 element is mixed for this. I suggest you to watch squardz action videos or sephi action/dance Smile

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4Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 5:26 pm

Squardz

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ok bru overall its something good and u can make it better for sure, i'm bad with explaining things but i will try to help as i can
the first 10 seconds are good enough and u can maybe change the scenes to make something make sense or an simple idea but its still good, fix the sync at 0:10 with the first action part its a bit late, try to use flares in some transition, and its just my opinion i dont really like RSMB overall so its up to u if u want to remove it , finally work more in that zoom out at 0:20 make it more smother, the rest is good ,i hope i could help u with my tips man and feel free and contact me or in this topic when u want some help again.
peace ~

5Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 9:51 pm

Kyuubbankai

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Staiks wrote:Honestly I'm the typical action trash so I'm not the best person to judge this, but everything feels clean and nice, I'd only improve the outzooms by this point, gj boiiiii okXD
yeah that was without zoom but i make it when i finish it

6Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 9:55 pm

Kyuubbankai

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Strat wrote:I liked how you changed cc in 0:04 to a scene night, I guess badr can help you more (squardz) with this kind of songs, but I will try to help.
Since 0:06, fast part is showing it in the song, so instead change the next scene with a beat (final compass) I would have starting changing to one scene, then keep coming with archer one. The point for flow is to combine the song vibe with the eye experience, so more than 1 element is mixed for this. I suggest you to watch squardz action videos or sephi action/dance Smile

Yes you are right the scene is also random and after the 6 seconds I should take an eye transition scene.

7Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 10:43 pm

Incursix

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So since its the fate series, it's really easy to use soft flares for action edits due to the anime's natural colors. For the third clip you used, it felt unnatural due to the scenes before and the one after all involving motion directed towards the left side, maybe if the 3rd clip was flipped horizontally to match the other scenes, it might feel more smooth. For the clip at 0:07, I feel like it should have been a different clip since we just saw archer standing up in the clip before but now he is kneeling which doesn't make the most sense. There is a few other little things to note such as the flow not being definitive enough and stuff like that but I'll just end off with saying to try to avoid static frames. Other than that, good job Very Happy

8Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Sun May 07, 2017 11:38 pm

gabberMD

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on the first 10 sec you should improve it with different clips. 'just a couple of them was good'
rest was quite fine so far (i guess is raw version) flow was pretty good so keep it up boii.
send us a new beta when you can so we can help you more Smile
waiting2

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9Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Mon May 08, 2017 1:03 am

Kyuubbankai

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gabberMD wrote:on the first 10 sec you should improve it with different clips. 'just a couple of them was good'
rest was quite fine so far (i guess is raw version) flow was pretty good so keep it up boii.
send us a new beta when you can so we can help you more Smile
waiting2
Thx you you all help me a lot and i make it when im make more.
I send it again

10Trying editing flow Empty Re: Trying editing flow Mon May 08, 2017 2:44 pm

gabberMD

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np okXD

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