Well some story before you watch the amv xD I originaly made it to test some stuff out (like fx and vfx) i just got inspired by one effect by voxyde (the ground opening one). Well i created it in 2 days and it was for New year. ^^
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Thanks for the feedback, and i know that i need to be more clean with my transitions. Like i said the amv was more like a test of some stuff so i didnt focused on transitions and things like that. Well im working on 2 full amvs ^^KazeShin wrote:Awesome compostion skills , you need to be carefull about your typo fx it very repetitive and next time try to make something coherent i mean Haikyuu and Bleach in the same amv don't fit at all haha. Lhh your transition need to be more clean for example at 0.17 how rip can appear like that it's not possible try to think more about your transition it need to be coherent and not random.
I'm waiting for a full amv from you, you have awesome composition skill
thank you dude ^^Strat wrote:I guess Kazeshin already told you all, but I'll say positive things like 0:30 loved it, didn't expect this, even I was seeing you're good with creative compositions.
You're still growing, keep it up dude, I see potential
Spasiba moi brat. Yeah its really random cuz i just wanted to try out new things, i didnt focused on transitions ^^Envy. wrote:Good work, but here is a strong random. There is no connection between frames. However, you are very good at FX and VFX.
I'm waiting for your new works)
you forgot the kappa broKyou wrote:Clean stuff bro!
wait for my Ch1ll VIMrGafudo wrote:Oh gud boi Dani! You improved a lot! OwO Just try to dont overuse the typo and hmmm dunno well just do it the way you like it more hahaha
Continue like this ;D
ye i read it often that i should be carefull with the typo, and maybe i will clean it up next year for silvester ^^gabberMD wrote:hey well i would sugg to be carefull about your typo also could be better with a different font
is pretty random but could be a really nice video, the second part was pretty cool
you should extend it and clean up some effects etc.
keep it up.
yeah thanks and well i tryed some new things out. Im not someone who loves fast cam movements tho but the whole video was more like a test thing ^^Genetix wrote:A bit random af the non stop cams are really the thing nowdays? is everywhere imo
i feel that you have the skillset to make something good but then again ur still to young so dw about all this and just keep on improving you'll get a lot better over time, i would suggest editing animes that have fluid animation so that u wont have the urge to make a cam (i hope if thats why u doing it all the time) try to use less static scenes for songs like this and about been it random im not saying it as u not following the song lyrics nobody really cares about that tho the actual scenes are just not really combined/put together that well they dont really fit each other
ps ground effect was really cool u still need to work on it tho
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